Get Your Entry Critiqued

Stories that make the final round of judging, and do not get published, get critiqued for free. However, we’ll now critique any contest entry for $10.

How it Works


If you submit a contest entry and are eventually told “Sorry, your entry did not make the final round of judging,” you may send us $10 and ask us to critique your non-finalist entry.

Make sure you also write to Critiques@OnThePremises.com so we have an e-mail address to send the critique to!

Our preferred method of payment for this service is PayPal (Critiques@OnThePremises.com is our PayPal address). If you use PayPal, be sure to include in your notes what story you’re asking us to critique, and what e-mail address to send the critique to.

Our second-most preferred method is a check sent through the US mail. You can write us at
Critiques@OnThePremises.com and we’ll give you a postal address to send the check to.

Our Philosophy of Critiquing

We believe critiques should help writers improve their fiction writing skills.

Our goals in critiquing a contest entry are to give you:

1) Reasons why your entry did not make the final round of judging.

2) Suggestions for improving the submitted story, your writing in general, or both.

One critique cannot turn a complete beginner into an award-winning professional author. However, we’ve had authors tell us that they revised their stories based on our critiques and sold their stories to another market. We can’t guarantee that result, but we’ll do our best.