Lynn Stearns leads “Memoir” and “Story Construction” workshops at the Writer’s Center in Bethesda, and serves as an associate fiction editor for the Potomac Review. Her most recently published stories are in anthologies: New Lines From The Old Line State (MWA Books), Not What I Expected (Paycock Press), and In Good Company (Live Wire Press). She is currently writing a novel in flash fiction format.




Ruptured

by Lynn Stearns



You come home from work and toss your keys onto the kitchen table, the day going like any other, actually better than most. He said he’d be over tonight, he wanted to talk to you about something important, and you think this is it – he’s finally ready to commit.

You’d fallen in love with everything about this man the first time you met, showing him condos outside of town and talking over coffee after – his leathery scent, and his voice, low and steady as he told you he was about to give up on ever finding his soul mate, until he met you. Then you remember the day you learned he was married, how you’d spotted his car parked in front of the dry cleaners, the yellow smiley face with a top hat on the antenna. You rarely went to that part of town, but had volunteered to pick up the summer rental brochures at the print shop next door. Everyone else was anxious to get home to hungry husbands and children or pets that needed attention.

You entered the dry cleaners with a big grin, imagining the surprise registering in his eyes when he saw you. A tall redhead, the only other person in the shop except a Chinese woman behind the counter, shot an annoyed glance in your direction and shivered at the blast of cold air that came in with you. As she pulled the collar of an emerald green coat closer around her throat, the wide gold band on her finger caught the light. She straightened her posture as she handed the woman a suede jacket the color of honey, saying to cover the buttons before exposing them to chemicals. You stepped aside as she clicked out in leather heels the exact shade of her coat, and watched as she got into his car and drove away.

He arrived the next evening, a bag from Won Ton Louie’s in one hand, a yellow rose in the other. As soon as you put the rose in water, you told him about seeing his car the day before, at the dry cleaners, and then you waited. Your mother had driven your father away with her constant nagging and accusations, making your life as well as his miserable, and you’d promised yourself you’d never be one of those women.

He pinched the bridge of his nose. “I’ve been a coward,” he said. Dry hacking sounds came from his throat as he went on about how he dreaded leaving you each week and going back to the house they shared, that he only did it because a lawyer-friend had advised him he’d be sorry later if he didn’t. He said he lived for Thursdays, when she thought he stayed after work for a staff meeting and poker game with the guys, that he slept in the guest room, and grabbed a muffin and cup of bad coffee from the office deli for breakfast every morning to avoid running into her in the kitchen. He told you they’d never had much in common, never should have gotten married. “I wanted to be honest with you, I swear, but I couldn’t bear the thought of hurting you.”

When he finally looked at you, the regret was obvious in his sigh and the slump of his shoulders. “And I was so afraid of losing you.” He held you close and whispered, “as soon as I can, you and me, I promise,” and you believed him.

You check the clock and smile, thinking you have time for a quick shower before slipping into the silk pajamas he gave you for your birthday, and then the phone is ringing. The next thing you know, you’re leaning against the wall, feeling as though you just slit your wrists and your whole life is draining out.

You wish you could turn back time, not answer, not hear the voice of the woman he claimed he hadn’t slept with since his first night with you. She sounded cool, in control, the way she was at the dry cleaners.

“His secretary told me he already left the office,” she said, “but I couldn’t get through to his cell phone. He was probably going through the dead zone by the Navy Yard. I’m at Memorial Hospital. I was in an accident and may have a ruptured spleen. Tell him to come right away. He can have his little talk with you later.”

You visualize her in a hospital gown, but with make-up perfectly applied and gold jewelry sparkling. Then you wonder how she knew about you, and exactly what a ruptured spleen meant – how serious it was – and almost miss the rest. It comes to you after you dial his cell phone and he says he’s glad you caught him before he got on the beltway. “I’ll cut across South Capitol – it’s shorter. If she calls again, tell her I’m on my way.”

You don’t remember hanging up, only regretting that you dialed his number, but then, you never thought he’d go to her. You never thought a lot of things, until now, and suddenly realize that it has been hard work, trying not to think, to only focus on the way you feel when he’s with you.

You look down at your wrists, expecting open gashes to be spilling your blood out on the floor. Instead you see that your hands are clenched into tight fists, the veins traveling just under the pale skin like highways on a road map.



Copyright 2009 by Lynn Stearns