Denver writer Bonnie McCune has had several short stories published in small publications, received prizes in three fiction contests, and was an award-winner in the 2009 Writer’s Digest short-short contest. She recently completed a novel, The Company of Old Ladies. She also has been a nonfiction freelance writer for many years, primarily in local publications. She is a dedicated and enthusiastic urbanite.



Corazón de Mi Vida, St. Teresa
[Heart of My Heart, St. Teresa]

by Bonnie F. McCune



Yolie and me, we sneak out of Burger King about seven. After the dinner rush, but before we have to do the crap at the end of the shift.

“Gotta get our
niños,” I tell the manager. His mouth gets all scrunched together like he has something up his ass. But what can he do? It isn’t like he has people lined up outside his office wanting a job. And me and Yolie, we’re real steady. Oh, we may be late once in a while, but we show up regular. We got to. Those babies need clothes and food, our mamas told us even before our stitches healed.

Yolie and me’ve been tight since sixth grade. First year of middle school, when we were the only Chicanas in the fast reading group. We sat by each other in reading, huddled together on the playground during lunch, walked home arm in arm. Took turns braiding our hair, tried on make up, whispered back and forth to each other what our big sisters had let loose about sex, periods, boys and how to attract them. And finally, at fifteen, we got pregnant together.

Was my mom pissed! Not Yolie’s. Her mom’s got so many, what’s one more, she says. But my mom goes on and on about Saint Teresa, how she named me for her so I’d choose the right path, yadda-yadda. What a load! This guy showed me on the computer at school, Saint Teresa, she was one wild girlfriend when she was young. So I don’t bend my mind over my mom’s bitching any more.

“Am I glad to get out of there,” Yolie says. “It was about a hundred and fifty degrees in the back. And that bitch Tina, I could see she was ready to play her little game again. Diddling around filling the napkin holders so she don’t have to scrub the floor or clean the stove.” She strips off her Burger King shirt right there on Fifteenth Street. We started wearing tube tops under our shirts at the beginning of summer, partly to get cool as fast as we can when we leave, partly to save time changing.

“So, how I look?” she asks, running her hands down the sides of the tube.

“Good. Real good. You’re almost as skinny as before the baby,” I say. Yolie always been thin but built on top, got
chichis out to there. That’s why guys always been hot for her, won’t leave her alone.

“Yeah, but you should see my stretch marks.” She’s still pissed I got none.

We cross the street to the bus stop and stand next to this guy whose boom box is so loud it’s giving me a headache. Yolie rolls her eyes and mouths “Ass hole.”

I say, “Let’s walk. It’s faster than taking the bus.”

We set off toward our
casas in northwest Denver, dragging our bodies through the July sun. It’s still so hot your feet kind of stick to asphalt in the street, and the air shimmers over the surface. I’m really moving. I don’t feel a thing, not the sun, not the traffic’s shaking on the road, not sore muscles from reaching and carrying at work. I’ve got a bubble of anticipation in my gut that’s nearly ready to burst from my throat.

“What’s your hurry?” says Yolie. “I’m gonna get heat stroke.” She’s panting like a puppy. Trickles of sweat run down the sides of her face and shoulders.

“Baby,” I say.

“Baby, nothing,” says Yolie. “The damn baby’s there all the time. What’s up?”

I don’t look any where but the viaduct overpass we’re starting to cross. It’s flung across the canyon below of railroad tracks and metal skeletons for new buildings called “lofts” instead of “apartments.” The overpass does have a sidewalk for pedestrians, about a foot wide and crammed between the crushed metal guard rail supposed to save us from getting run over by cars and the web of more metal of bridge supports that soar high in the air.

“I want to get to El Taqueria,” I yell over the roar of the cars going past at six hundred miles an hour.

“To see Amando?” Yolie says. “Don’t you got a date with him tonight anyway?”

“No, not to see Amando. And, no, I don’t got a date with him. He just thinks ’cause he’s Miguel’s father, I should drop everything whenever he shows up. He don’t own me.”

“Maybe it’s ‘cause he also thinks you two are getting married.”

“Well, we ain’t. I haven’t decided. I’m too young to get stuck in some cruddy two-bedroom apartment dropping a brat every coupla years, only thing for fun watching tv and going out for a beer once in a while. Maybe I wanna see something different from this ’hood
, same people every day, same dirty streets, same broken windows in the houses, same music blaring from the doors.”

“You’re old enough, you
loco. What else is there to do?” Yolie’s guy disappeared when he learned her baby was on the way. She never had a chance to get married even though her mom and her had a fancy white dress all picked out and her dad was talking to the priest.

“Anyway, Amando got a ‘tude. Thinks he’s tough shit, doing me a favor by sticking with me. He’s not so great. Ain’t even got a job.”

“If not to see Amando, then why?”

“Okay. I have like this kind of appointment with Lalo.”

“Lalo? That geek. You still hanging with him? I thought when school let out, you gave him up. You don’t need his help for tests and shit now.”

“Nope,” I say. “I want to see him.” I start scrambling down the weed-choked embankment at the end of the viaduct, fighting through broken bottles, shredded newspapers, cigarette butts, used condoms, to cut off a couple of streets from our route, a path over a lonely vacant lot, then through the backyards of some neighbors. Yolie follows me.

“Why you like him so much?”

“He talks to me about stuff,” I yell over my shoulder.

“What stuff.”

“Oh, about how he’s gonna study computers and what do I think about what the mayor’s doing, things like that. About St. Teresa, she was boy-crazy when she was young, but she also had charm and imagination and intelligence, like me. He acts like I have a brain, not just a cunt,” I say.

“Sounds boring. And he’s a dog. Don’t know how to dress at all.” I stay silent. I think Lalo is very sexy, but in a quiet Jimmy Smits kind of way. No, he don’t wear his pants pulled low around his butt or have an earring or put on those shiny shirts, but his eyes look right at you, like you’re the only thing he’s seeing. I used to run into him at the library, and he’d show me shit on the Internet, not dirty stuff but answers to questions for class and then places for moms, how many shots their kids should get, what babies are like when their teeth come in. We’d giggle and laugh and poke each other.

As Yolie and me cut through the Gomez back yard, ducking under the laundry, Mrs. Gomez comes out. “Hi, girls. How are the babies?”

Yolie is always ready to talk about Gabriela, like that kid’s the only thing she’s ever done she’s proud of. She yaps and yaps, how much Gabriela weighs, how she grabs her spoon to try to eat her food, that kind of shit. I shift from foot to foot. Is Lalo waiting at El Taqueria? Drinking the iced tea he prefers to soft drinks? Licking sugar off the rim of the glass? Pressing the cool tumbler against his hot cheek? Is the waitress flirting with him, throwing him bold looks from the corner of her soft dark eyes? Saint Teresa, help me.

Sure is hot. I remember the day Lalo gave me a ride home in a snowstorm last winter. Cold then. When we got to my house, he parked his car and started talking about where he was going to travel after he left school. Places where it never snowed. Deserts full of nothing but sand and stones and snakes and sun. Jungles with tangled trees and vines, tigers hunting deer, sudden showers of warm rain. Talked so real I could see the places in front of me and him in them. Then he asked me what I was going to do. Until he remembered and looked at my belly sticking out hard and full as a baseketball.

“Guess I’m not,” I said, and I rubbed the lump that was my baby. He was kicking like crazy in there, like he wanted to jump out and join Lalo in a jungle.

“Not right away,” Lalo said. “But things can change. Anything can change.”

And in that minute, I believed him. How could I not? His hands, usually gripping a load of books or the straps of a backpack, now stroked the steering wheel with fingertips. His dark eyes, which in school stared hard and long at teachers, now grew heavy as he seemed to be drifting away from the car in front of my house into strange, different settings. When he turned to me, it was like he invited me to come with him.

Then he kept talking. And that man sure can talk. About how the service could make life clean and straight-shooting. He had an uncle who’d signed up who swore it was the best fuckin’ move he’d made in his life. Steady good money, rules and bosses that made sense, lots of space from people who used to disrespect him. Lalo said his uncle was planning to study computer repair; if you were interested, free training in all kinds of jobs. A man could have a great life and raise a fine family in the service.

I look around at the Gomez yard. Over here, a kid’s hard plastic wading pool, its colored bottom making the water in it look blue between the load of toys and the scattering of yucky limp leaves floating on top. Then a long smear of mud in a path to the square cement patio by the back door where a bunch of white plastic lawn chairs look like they’ve been abandoned the night before. Some rickety metal TV trays still hold beer cans, and on the ground around their bent legs scutter an empty tortilla chip bag and a bunch of other junk. Nothing new or clean. It’s no different from any yard, any house in this neighborhood. Sometimes this ‘hood looks like it’s the dumpster of the whole city, crap all over the alleys. Smells like it, too. I never noticed until I was pregnant. The greasy tang of fat floating in the air as mamis fry tortillas or grill meat, the constant tang of cilantro and chili made me sick to my stomach. Then, one time Lalo talked about the air in Texas, how clean it smelled, and how in the Army, trash don’t even hit the ground before it’s picked up.

“We got to go,” I say, first in a whisper, then loud.

They keep talking. “And Miguel?” Mrs. Gomez says to me. “How’s he?”
“Fine, fine. Mrs. Gomez, we got to go,” I say.

Nope they keep talking. Their flapping jaws stir up the only breeze in the city. Finally I pull Yolie’s hand. “
Hasta la vista, Mrs. Gomez,” I say, “los niños, ya know,” and actually drag Yolie away.

I tell her, “Girl, you made this short cut into a long cut.” I race into my house and grab Miguel, feel his diaper, not too wet, stuff him into his stroller, wriggle my fingers at my mami, and am on my way out the door before Yolie can finish putting on more lipstick. The screen door bangs behind me, off half its hinges, and the crumbling concrete of the front steps tries to trip the wheels of the stroller. I’m used to dodging these screw-ups, so I fly.

Yolie pokes along after me. “Chill. Everybody will still be hanging. The cafe won’t burn down.”

“Told you, I have this thing with Lalo. I was supposed to be there at 7:30. His last night in town. He’s going into the Army tomorrow.” Right now I don’t care if Yolie gets pissed off at me, don’t care about my mom’s shout to take the baby clothes to the laundromat, or if I’m uncool jogging to meet a guy. I promised, I promised, I promised to meet Lalo to say goodbye, to find out his new address, a phone, even an e-mail. Yesterday he came into BK and didn’t order nothing, not even a pop. He must have dropped by just to swear that he wanted me to stay in touch with him. If I don’t make see him tonight, he’ll disappear like a puff of smoke, or a TV show you switch off and it’s gone.

I gallop down the street so fast, the baby’s head bounces against the back of the stroller and he giggles. With each step I chant, Saint Teresa, Saint Teresa. The evening wind is coming up, and for a few seconds, through waves of dust blown out of the gutter and off the drying lawns, I think about me and Lalo and Miguel in an even hotter place, say, Texas. In a little apartment, Lalo peeling out of his uniform, me jiggling the baby and holding a beer for Lalo. I can see the heavy, tasseled curtains at the windows, a big mirror with gold trim over the velvet couch, on the wall lots of pictures of us and Miguel and our families, a major TV and entertainment center in dark wood with shelf after shelf rising to the ceiling. I feel absolutely safe but somehow excited, too, like I been drinking too much Sprite and my ears are buzzing.

Way down the street by El Taqueria, I can see a group of people standing out front or propped on their cars, smoking, sharing a soft drink, but I can’t tell if Lalo is one of them. Coupla them got their radios turned up real high with songs rocking the air. Closer, closer, I’m breathing really fast and humming along with the song. Then I see someone come out of the cafe, tall, thin and graceful as a young cat, he gets into a car, that’s Lalo’s car, oh, no, and pulls away off down the road, going the other way away from me and Miguel.

For a minute I can’t inhale, can’t see, can’t talk or feel. Miguel beats at the air with small fists as if he’s the challenger in a fight, which brings me back to life. “Now see what you did,” I shriek at Yolie. “He’s gone. He thought I stood him up.”

Yolie shrugs. “No big deal. One man is pretty much like another.”

Now she’s leading and I’m dragging behind. I feel like crying. Goodbye, Texas. Goodbye, little apartment with a thirty-six inch TV, king-size bed, tiny crib for Miguel in his very own bedroom. We come up to the cafe, and there’s Amando, talking and bragging like he always does. Miguel starts whimpering, and I pick him up and pull out a piece of chocolate for him to suck on.

After Amando shoots the bull for a while with his friends, he comes up to me. “There’s my
mamacita. How you doing? Ready to party tonight?” He grabs me around the shoulders and squeezes me.

I shrug. “I guess.”

The baby screams and rubs his face with his hands. His fat cheeks, mouth, and chin are covered with sticky chocolate.

“What’s wrong with him?” asks Amando. “Need more candy?”

“Naw, he’s teething. Fussy. Maybe running a temp. Maybe I shouldn’t go tonight.”
“Don’t be loco. Give him to me.” Amando takes Miguel and jiggles him up and down. “That’s my hijo.” Miguel yells louder and spits chocolate-colored drool all over Amando’s shirt. Amando hands him back faster than you can flip a tortilla.

“We got to go talk to my mama first, before we hit the road,” says Amando. “She wants to know how many people from your side coming to our wedding.” He strokes my arm, nuzzles my neck, something he’s done since the first time we got together. I used to think it was sweet, kinda protecting me, kinda putting moves on me. Guess that’s why I started doing it with him last year. He wanted me so bad and I was curious.

I’m still wiping the spit off Miguel. It’s making his plump rosy cheeks shiny. He’s trying to stick all ten, fat, chocolate-covered fingers into his circle mouth at once. Everything about him is round—his head, the tip of his nose, his eyes, his cheeks, all over his body—like he’s made of a bunch of squishy balls all molded together.

“Hey,” says Amando. “The wedding? We can get my cousin’s band for nothing.”

I look at Amando and can see some of Miguel’s roundness in him, his belly, his chin. No lie that he’s Miguel’s father. Lalo’s kid would be skinny and long, with eyes so big you can fall in them, and a nose and chin like a statue. Then I’m staring down the street in the direction of Lalo’s car, then over the tops of buildings, past the mountains, at nothing. “Whatever,” I say.


Copyright 2009 by Bonnie F. McCune