Ramesh is based in Bangalore, southern India, and writes full time, both fiction and nonfiction. His work has appeared in in the university journals of Chicago (Contrary), Drexel (Dragonfire), California (Gastronomica), Liverpool (The Reader) and Western Australia (Westerly). He contributes to World & I Journal, Reptilia, and numerous other non-fiction magazines. He is currently at work on a novel and also enjoys photography, nature walks, and gossip.



Avatars on Tirumala Hill

by Ramesh Avadhani


The man at the desk looks no different from the thousands of pilgrims swarming this temple town atop Tirumala Hill in southern India. His head is shaved except for a small tuft at the back, and his brow is adorned with a thick nama, a trident-shaped mark in chalk. It’s the symbol of the reigning deity, Venkateshwara, avatar of Lord Vishnu, protector of all life.

“I made a reservation over phone,” I say. “Ravi Kumar Iyengar, Cottage 121.”

“Alone?” the man asks, as his pen scans a register that’s spread over half the desk.

I gesture at the far end of the lobby. “The maroon dress, she’s with me.”

He looks there. About twenty men and women are in anxious huddles on the sofas but Meenu is like a formidable goddess on a separate chair. Her bust is an excessive blessing and her long legs are splayed as if any obeisance is welcome.

“Your wife?” he asks.

“Just married,” I lie.

“She would have to wear a sari to enter the temple,” he murmurs, still staring at her.

“I know. Look, just give me the cottage. We want to freshen up.”

“Of course, of course.” With visible effort he tears his gaze away and turns the giant register around. I scribble my name and address. He hands me the key.

Meenu sees me approach but makes no attempt to get up. Either she’s tired, because it’s taken us six hours by bus to come here, or she’s playing one of her favorite games:
Show Me That Only I Matter. Or Who Do You Think You Are?

I nod at her and walk past.
If You Want Me, Follow Me.

*


She is 23, same as me, and both of us live in Bangalore. I met her on a dating website some months ago. I have proposed marriage but she wants more time. I am impatient though, that’s why I have brought her here; maybe this sacred environment will help her decide. After all, I told her, even Lord Venkateshwara got to marry his sweetheart, Padmavathi, on this very hill, though not before he underwent a lot of difficulties and penance. The story is that Venkateshwara, as an avatar of Vishnu, struggled to win back Padmavathi, who was herself an avatar of Lakshmi, Vishnu’s wife. Lakshmi had deserted Vishnu from their heavenly abode because he forgave a sage who kicked him in the chest. Vishnu’s chest was where Lakshmi resided.

Meenu had laughed at that, saying how could I believe such a complex cock and bull story? What were these avatars anyway? Avatars, I said, were incarnations or manifestations of the supreme being. Vishnu himself is an avatar! He assumed several more forms for several tasks—to act as the noble son and husband even at great personal cost (Lord Rama), to bring justice in an unjust world (Lord Krishna), or to preach the right path (Lord Buddha). In this case, the avatar of Venkateshwara was showing us how important love is and once lost how difficult it is to regain it. Meenu laughed some more at that, but in the end, agreed to come to Tirumala, saying at least she would get to see the famous temple; she hadn’t been there before.

*


I stand outside and look around. It’s almost a year since I was here last. Some things have changed. To the right, construction work is on for two new
choultries—massive buildings that provide free accommodation for pilgrims. The main bazaar to the left has enlarged; more shops, more pavement vendors. But beyond them, the richest Hindu temple remains unchanged—a high wall of granite, a white tower at the entrance crowned with seven golden spires, and like a backdrop borrowed from a painting, an undulating stretch of misty green hills. The air resonates with Vedic verses from loudspeakers fixed to electric poles and rooftops. The Sanskrit beats into my ears with a stridency that seems to ask: So, hoping for better luck this time?

I sense someone approaching from behind. It’s Meenu and she’s sliding her cell phone back into her purse. The goddamn cell phone. Who has she been talking to now? She has so many friends and I know nothing about them. She works in a big call center. As for my phone, it hardly rings; I am an insurance salesman; I am the one who makes all the calls.

“How far is the cottage?” she asks.

“Ten minute walk,” I reply.

“Let’s get a taxi.”

“No taxis here. We are supposed to walk. Or use the free buses.”

“That’s silly!”

I refrain from saying anything. By evening she should be in a better mood. This place is like that; everyone changes here.

*


We go up the main road. The weather is surprisingly hot; summer is still a month away and this is supposed to be a fairly tall hill. Midway to the right, several cottages come up—compact structures in arched rows, painted a super white, each fronted by an elegant porch, a tidy garden. It’s as if Venkateshwara himself has designed the entire place to promote love and peace.

Cottage 121 is the twenty-first in the first row. By the time we get there my shirt is pasted to my body. Meenu is worse; her creamy face has reddened and the fabric under her armpits is wet with sweat.

The cottage has two rooms. I choose the one I occupied a year ago. Even before I close the door, Meenu starts undressing. I gape; I didn’t expect her to do this. Her black bra and panties are so full and tight that my throat goes dry.

“I hope the water is cool,” she says with a dramatic sigh. She rummages for a towel in my suitcase and walks off as if I don’t exist. I can only stare at all the jiggling and swaying. Moments later I hear the shower turned on. I imagine water negotiating firm hills and mysterious valleys. Just then the sound of a muffled ring-tone. It’s from Meenu’s purse. I quickly take out her cell phone and press the answer button.

It’s a male voice, eager and strong. “Hi sweetie! When are you coming back?”

I don’t answer.

“Meenu?”

I peer at the display. AJN. Obviously an acronym.

“Who is this?” I ask.

The line disconnects. It’s happened several times before. Different voices, different acronyms. There’s no point in asking her about them. The first time I asked, she flared up, saying I was invading her privacy. Meaning:
I can do what I please.

*


I sit at the small table near the window. This is where I worked in my first job as Public Relations Officer of a spiritual organization. We had organized a camp to teach yoga and meditation. Forty-five men and women enrolled for the course. And Kiran was one of them, a stunning dusky beauty from Delhi. I wonder what she’s doing now.

“You are Kumar, right?” she’d asked, a little breathlessly when she stepped into this very cottage. She was in a shimmering cream and gold sari, her complexion like coffee seeds roasted to a perfect brown.

I almost fell off my chair in my haste to get up. “Ravi. Ravi Kumar Iyengar.”

“Great! Where do I stay?”

I picked up a file.

“Kiran Rao,” she said from behind. I could feel warm puffs of her breath on my shirtsleeve.

“Cottage no 337.”

“Will you take me there?” Her eyes were lined with kohl and the big dot of a crimson
bottu in the middle of her forehead was like a third eye.

“It’s my duty,” I said.

“You are so cute!”

I must have flushed because she giggled.

Cottage 337 was farther up the hill, and as we trudged towards it, her sari flirted with the irregular breeze, exposing a large navel and a vignetted cleavage. She appeared so vibrant, so adventurous. What made her join this course? Was she looking for some fun? Or was she under some emotional stress?

“Give me that,” I said, reaching for her suitcase.

“I was waiting for you to ask,” she laughed. We walked on for some time. “Somu would have loved this,” she said.

“Somu?”

“Somashekhar. My husband. He is a lawyer. Criminal.” A pause. “I meant criminal lawyer.” Another laugh.

“You seem too young to be married.” I thought she would confide her age.

She didn’t. “Yeah? Well…thank you. I told Somu I wanted to do this course. He said, ‘Go ahead, perhaps when you come back you can teach my clients yoga and meditation. I can charge them more.’” She mimicked a flat voice and glanced at me. I felt confident that she expected me to laugh, so I laughed, but she looked away as if I had done something terribly unacceptable.

We reached cottage No. 337. I opened the lock and placed her suitcase on the floor. She stooped to pick up the suitcase and her sari fell away from her shoulders. The half-moons in her blouse swayed a little. She caught me looking and straightened up. “Why don’t you come in?” she said, not making any effort to cover her blouse. She went on, “But if you’re busy, we can meet some other time.” Then she went in and all I could do was mumble a “yes” that she didn’t hear, and stagger away.

*


Meenu emerges from her bath. The white towel is woefully inadequate for her bursting curves. The aroma of sandalwood soap is sharp and teasing. I remember another aroma that had clouded my mind a year ago.

“What? Dreaming again?” she taunts.

She accuses me of that often, that my mind wanders, that I sometimes forget she’s with me.

“I…I was waiting for you to finish,” I say and go past her. It’s only when I finish my bath that I realize I have forgotten to bring a fresh pair of briefs. I have only a towel and it’s thin. I can imagine Meena glancing at the towel, her nose wrinkling. “Something on your mind?” she might say in her usual taunting manner.

I slide down along the wall and sit, my naked bottom soaking in the cold of the tiles. I remember the last time I sat like this. One afternoon, after lunch at the
choultry, I was returning to my cottage when I saw Kiran pacing the portico of my cottage.

“Ravi!” she called out even before I reached her. “Thank god you came. There’s an an…animal in my cottage.”

“Animal?”

“It made an awful lot of noise. Like…like…I don’t know.”

We rushed to her cottage. “In the bathroom,” she whispered. I went there. “Here take this,” she said, pressing a plastic ruler into my hand.

I put my ear to the door. Nothing. I slid open the latch and pushed the door a couple of inches. No sound, only Kiran breathing behind me. I pushed the door some more. A wall of green tiles spattered with water and a blue bucket beneath a tap. I pushed the door all the way back. A mop, another bucket under another tap, a small window to the left, a bottle of shampoo on the sill. Then it started; a shrill
hut-hut-hut-hut. Kiran held me, her softness pressing my back at several points.

Hut-hut-hut-hut.

In the dim light I could make out a cone-like yellowish object behind the smaller bucket. A snake? It moved out an inch. Two large eyes and a bluish bead at the throat. What animal was this? I took one more step.

That’s when it emitted a piercing cry. From behind, Kiran clutched me so tight my knees wobbled. No woman had held me like this. I tapped the ruler hard on the tiles. The yellow object leapt and went smack into the wall. The animal fell back on the floor and was still. Just the beady growth at its throat inflated and deflated. It was the Indian bullfrog, an ugly bloated creature. The large eyes closed and opened, like blinks in slow motion. Kiran was still holding on to me.

I laughed and gasped. “Why…why don’t you sit while I chase this fellow out?”

It took me ten minutes to urge the amphibian out of the cottage.

Kiran clapped her hands. “Thank you, Ravi!” Then she gestured at the bed. “Sit for sometime,” she urged. Her gaze traveled down my shirt, my pants. God, was the stiffness in my pants showing? Apart from the bed there was just one chair. I went there and my legs crossed automatically. From outside the loudspeakers started their metallic twang. It was an ode to Venkateshwara, hailing his compassion towards sinners who surrendered to him.

“It’s so peaceful here, isn’t it?” Kiran murmured. “This yoga course. This cottage. This…this entire atmosphere. Back home it’s hell. Each day is a torture.”

I waited for her to go on but she reached up to hold her hair. Up and down her arms moved like engineering tools. She coiled her hair into a knot and when she jerked tight, her twin mounds shook like jelly being tossed in a bowl.

“Your husband,” I said. “Does he, I mean, doesn’t he mind you being away?”

“Let’s not talk about him, okay?”

I gazed at my fingers. They were intertwining by themselves.

“Sorry for speaking like that,” she said. Then she went to close the door.

“Ravi, look at me.”

I obeyed.

“You haven’t had a girl, yes?”

I knew then what is meant by a husky voice.

“Poor boy!” she murmured and came to stand near me. Her lavender perfume enveloped me in heady swirls. The folds of her sari, the rise and fall of her blouse, the large and deep navel, I felt faint. Her hands came on my temples. She pressed lightly, as if I were a fragile sculpture, and raised my face. The next moment her lips were on mine. I stood up, and this time she crushed herself against me. Her hands roved all over my back. Then one hand came to the front and traveled in an unthinkable direction. God, it was there, stroking the hardness. I let my own hand stray all over her blouse and squeezed lightly. I wondered if I was causing her some pain too. As if on cue, she moaned. Her fingers searched frantically. Then her hand was in, her sharp nails grazing. I felt my head dissolve and then, suddenly, something scorched through all that storm. I drew away.

Her eyes went wide. “What?”

“I don’t think...I…” I was unable to continue because the room started to tilt and something flapped in my chest. Her gaze flicked down to my nakedness. I turned and zipped up, nearly getting caught in the zip.

“Ravi!”

I opened the door and stumbled out. If only she hadn’t been married. Back in my cottage I stood under a cold shower for a long time.

*


When I emerge from the bathroom, Meenu isn’t bothered about the thin towel wrapped around my hips. She is examining herself; she has changed into a sari. A splendid blue silk with a silvery border. She adjusts the pleats at her waist.

“Nice?” she asks.

“Very nice,” I say.

“Let’s go to the temple.” There’s enthusiasm in her voice. I am pleased. She looks so much like Kiran now, except for her hair which is short and silky. Kiran’s was long and dense.

We walk down the main road, amidst a babble of Malayalam and Telugu, Kannada and Tamil, the principal languages of southern India. We go past the terminus where mud-caked buses stand exhausted, past a shed-like structure where barbers squat in military rows and shave penitent heads, past vendors surrounded by diligent heaps of flowers and fruits, vermilion and turmeric powders: all the requisites for a proper salutation to Venkateshwara. Then we are in a huge quadrangle the size of several football grounds.

Groups of pilgrims stream up and down like confounded armies. Farther, near the stone walls, hundreds more are lined up in a queue behind steel railings, eager to receive what Venkateshwara guarantees: absolution and success. All he requires is a donation; he’s still paying back only the interest on a big loan taken from Kubera, the wealthiest god. Venkateshwara was quite the pauper when he wanted to marry Padmavathi.

“It’s so damn hot here,” Meenu says. Her face streams with sweat and some of her silky hair is plastered to her cheeks like wayward tendrils. “Do we have to stand in that queue?”

“I know a priest,” I tell her. “Wait here.”

I sprint to the main gate. Inside a group of half-naked priests are in discussion. I think I see the one I know but I am not sure; he looks plumper now. Just then a policeman approaches from the left. “What?” he demands, waving a wicked baton.

“I want to meet Acharya Kesavan. He knows me.”

“So?”

“Acharya permitted me to use the special gate. Just call him. I think he’s standing there.”

Another wave of the baton. “No, no, we have stopped all that. Everyone has to be screened thoroughly. Security concerns. No cameras. No cell phones. Go stand in the common queue.”

It would take at least four hours to reach the sanctum sanctorum by the common queue. I go back to where I left Meenu but she isn’t there. I look around. There she is, near a vendor of tender coconuts, talking into her blasted cell phone. Who is it this time? She sees me and shoves the phone into her purse. I go up and tell her about the security concerns.

“Four hours in the queue? Not worth it, Ravi. Let’s go back to the cottage.” She holds my hand and pulls.

I resist. “It’s an extraordinary experience, Meenu. You shouldn’t miss it.”

I tell her about the dimly lit sanctum sanctorum, the heady smells of joss sticks and oil lamps, the priests drawing great circles of honor with a flaming spoon of camphor, and Venkateshwara, black and serene, swathed in gold and diamonds, silks and flowers, and apparently blind; an enormous
nama covers much of his forehead and all of his eyes. I tell her about the legends associated with those covered eyes. One is that they are so intense they can scorch the entire universe. Another is that since this is kaliyuga, the era of strife, he won’t open his eyes unless humanity as a whole improves. And a third is that he wants to show us that only he matters, everything else is maya, an illusion.

Meenu giggles so much that my face goes hot. She comes close and whispers in my ear, “Well, I can show you something that’s absolutely real.” For a moment I am puzzled and then a heavy softness presses against my left arm.

*


After that passionate afternoon, Kiran and I avoided each other. The few times we couldn’t, we exchanged little nods and little smiles like two strangers compelled to be well mannered. Then one evening everything changed. I was walking towards the temple. The sun was setting rapidly, evoking long shadows and imparting a yellowish tinge to everything around. The bazaar came up and an urchin approached, holding out muddy fingers. I gave him a coin. He scampered away and almost collided with a woman in a bottle-green sari. She was facing the other way. The drape of her sari, so low at the hips, and the deep cut of her blouse at the back, showing off shoulder blades like satiny wings, looked familiar.

“Looking for me?” said a husky voice at my elbow. I whirled around. Kiran! And how different she looked. In one hand she held a plastic basket: a half coconut, a couple of bananas, some asters, and little round packets of turmeric and vermillion powders. Her forehead was devoid of that third eye, but in the parting of her hair a streak of crimson powder cried like an exclamation mark. Her sari was the traditional favorite—yellow silk with a gold border the size of one hand span. The fabric was wrapped around her body in such a way that not an inch of flesh showed. Padmavathi must have looked like this on the day of her wedding to Venkateshwara.

“Just passing time,” I mumbled.

“Let’s have some coffee. At Woodlands.”

“I don’t think—”

“Oh, come on, Ravi. Don’t act so uppity. What have I asked? Just a coffee, not your life.”

We went past the temple to reach Woodlands, a large restaurant surrounded by numerous Flame of the Forest trees.

“What did you want to talk about?” I asked after I ordered coffees.

She shrugged. “Nothing. I went to the temple. Offered prayers. Then I watched a procession where they took the gods in a palanquin. All that chanting and marching and dozens of lamps, it was all like a movie set. I believe they shoot a lot of movies here. Did you know that?”

“No.”

“Did you know that last year the temple got something like ten billion rupees in donations of all kinds—money, gold, diamond studded crowns, even property deeds made out for the temple?”

I shook my head. Why was she saying all this?

“Do you know that I love you?” she said.

I stared. Those big, black eyes didn’t blink.

“Kiran, you know nothing about me.”

She smiled. “Are you a criminal?”

“What!”

She sighed a sigh that said she hadn’t met a stupider person than I. The waiter came with our coffees and I was relieved to look at something else. The froth was a good one-inch thick. I watched the bubbles die at unpredictable points.

“Ravi, mine was an arranged marriage. Somu is twelve years older. I married him because my parents owed his family a lot of money. His parents said they’d forget the loans if I married him. What could I do?”

“I…I’m sorry to hear that.”

She laughed. “You speak like a politician! Anyway, I thought you should know something about me. Before you make a decision.”

Decision? What was she talking about? She puffed her cheeks and blew in her cup. The froth lifted in a wave to reveal the coffee—brown and rich. Just like her skin.

“What are you talking about?” I asked.

“Your future.”

“I just want to establish myself in a good career.”

“In
this place?”

“Of course not. I want to work in a good company. In marketing. I think I’ll do well in that field.”

“Come to Delhi. All the top companies are there.”

I didn’t know what to say. Kiran laughed and the sari over her bust heaved. “You don’t trust me or don’t like me?” she asked.

“Kiran, it’s not—”

“You men are such duffers. Can’t you recognize genuine love when you see it?”

I just looked at my coffee. I wondered about her husband. Was he also a duffer? How could he permit such an attractive wife to be away from him? Was he in love with someone else?

“What sort of a girl do you want?” she murmured.

I shook my head. “I am not thinking of—”

“Ravi, look at me.”

I looked.

“Come with me to Delhi. I’ll put you up in an apartment. Let’s see how it works out between us. For three months, six months. Then you can decide.” There was again that frank intensity about her face that took my breath away.

“Kiran, I like you. I like you a lot. But—” I groped for the right words, and before my eyes her face shrank and her throat bobbed as if she’d swallowed something hard and large. She waved at the waiter, asking for the bill.

We came out of the restaurant. “I…I have to go to the temple,” I said, although my feet seemed chained to the ground.

Her hand came on to my wrist and there was just the gentlest of pressures, a fraction of what she’d exerted on the day of the bullfrog. She stepped up close. Those black eyes were filling. I bent my head and stared at the ground between us.

“Thank you for liking me,” she murmured and then her hand dropped away. She turned and walked off. I watched her till she disappeared in the throng of pilgrims. She left Tirumala the following day.

*


Back in the cottage, Meenu does it again: unraveling her sari even before I close the door. It disturbs me but before I give more thought to it, she says, “Switch on the light. It’s so dark.”

I do that.

She unbuttons her blouse and steps out of the pool of silk on the floor. Then her hands go to the back to unclasp her bra. Twin mounds tumble out in relief, and the tips are like exotic betel nuts.

“Nice?” she asks. The half smile on her lips is so mysterious, so taunting.

I nod and remove my shirt. She waits, eyeing my pants. I can’t do this with the light on, so I go to the switch.

“No!” she commands.

I hesitate. She comes up and hooks a finger into my waist and tugs.

I push away her hand. “You first.”

Without much ado she slips her panties down her thighs. It’s a geometry I have never seen before, flawless curves ensconcing a tidy triangle.

“Your turn,” she says. I quickly unzip my trousers and she eyes the bulge in my briefs.

“Go on,” she urges. But I can’t do it; there’s a sudden heaviness in the air; it’s as if Venkateshwara has penetrated the walls right into this cottage. I switch off the light.

She mutters something under her breath and goes to the bed and lies there, her legs drawn up, her eyes riveted to the ceiling. There’s a change in her, I can sense it; I am not sure if I should approach the bed. Just then her damn cell phone rings. Her shadowy figure sits up in a trice. She leaves the bed, finds her phone and goes to the bathroom.

I sit on the bed. Minutes pass; she’s still talking. There’s no point, I tell myself. This is stupid. This is really my desperation to seek out an avatar of someone I lost, and for her I am just a convenient form in flesh rather than a digital acronym on her cell phone. I put my clothes back on and go out. I can still hear her talking.

*


Outside the air echoes with the dulcet tones of the south Indian classical singer, M. S. Subbulakshmi:
O Venkateshwara, bestower of all benefits, closest kin of the universe, bottomless ocean of compassion, tireless worker for the world’s equilibrium…

There are fewer pilgrims on the main road. The bazaar, however, is noisy and crowded. A dosa stall comes up. The man is brushing clean a hot griddle on which he has splattered water. He pours a cup of the rice batter and spreads it out expertly, swiftly. The perfect round begins to show innumerable tiny holes. He picks up a spatula and clangs the sides of the griddle.

“Hot dosas, hot dosas!” he shouts at the pilgrims streaming past. But it’s clear that only Venkateshwara matters. The man turns to me as I approach, his eyes gushing hope. “Dosa, Sir?”

I shake my head and walk on. Ah… the post office. It’s closed but there’s a bench outside. I go and sit there and close my eyes. I don’t know how long I keep them closed. I sense the crowds lessening. Then the holy verses stop abruptly, as if they have accomplished something. I open my eyes. Everything is still and remote, the buildings, the bazaar, the streets. Only a few pilgrims move about but even they seem to be floating in another world. I rise from the bench and head back to the cottage.



Copyright 2009 by Ramesh Avadhani